Monday, February 4, 2013

The Icicle

Winter's drool path can impale
the unsuspecting fools who believed in you

Failure is a luxuriously slow drip-by-drip process
in the morning it appears glistening and sudden

What was a line of spry sparkling kisses
now jammed together in the shape of a canine

The ever returning sun reveals the pollutants
silent like germs

Specks of grit and tiny insects
taste like your name sounds

You try again, but the melting
just sharpens the point

Makes shriller the spitting
sound of breakage

The noise of gravity
that has no
reverse




1 comment:

  1. This exercise was to take an abstract concept and turn it into an extended, concrete metaphor. I chose failure, which become icicle (but with mouth-like qualities??).

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